Kane - Application

[Wolfy]

As much as I love how long Kane's history is, I feel it's just a bit... overpowering, But That doesn't really matter. What I want to make sure is that, whenever you actually Roleplay, that you won't put her actions in Asterisks. I hate to say it, but that's a very amateur way to do so. Though, I completely understand if her history is exceptionally old and you just haven't edited it yet.

And, she has Fire Alchemy? Would you mind telling me how that is so? I'm sorry if you stated so in her History, but I have to be honest and say I skipped a great amount of it because I was getting a headache at such small text in such a large group. I just want to emphasize that Roy actually had to use Riza as practically an experiment before he could use his Flame Alchemy, which is why she has that Tattoo (this is only in Brotherhood and the Manga, so I apologize for spoiling it if you have not read/watched those). But, since we are a crossover, in a sense, between them all, Kane would have to have done the same, somehow. And Riza's father was, by what I know, one of the extremely few, if not the only one, who knew the secrets of Flame Alchemy.
And two Alchemic Elements is also very rare. I would suggest that, if you should choose one, to take the Lightning one. Not only is it not seen (by me, anyways) so far into the series, but it would work in many more places (i.e., under water, during storms, etc.)
She also seems... just a tad bit young to be a State Alchemist. Just a tad. She's not even considered an adult yet, really... But, I may just approve of it if you answer these things.

Please keep in mind that I am not trying to sound rude or harsh or bash your character in any way. I'm simply just trying to keep all the characters fair. Plus, you have to admit, we don't want fifty million sixteen-year-olds shooting off flames like Roy running around Amestris, now do we? I hope you understand. (:

[Wolfy]

OR MAYBE I MISREAD, I DUNNO <.< I had a headache, at the time, so I just skimmed. Skimmed, skimmed, skimmed...~

But her Alchemy seems very well-thought out and, honestly, I could just barely wrap my head around the chemicals and junk, since I hate to say that I haven't exactly learned anything about them other by the Science Channel my Dad always watches on TV. But, with that said,

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